Wonderful Words and Why I Like Them

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    From Wind and Silver:
  • Floats. It makes me picture the moon floating in dark water.
  • Flash. It's an exciting, active word. I think it helps "wake up" the poem.
  • Fish. "Fish" goes so well with "Floats" and "Flash." I also like the soft "sssh" sound it ends with.

    From The Snow:
  • Sieves. It's a great word to use for "snowy skies" (especially when paired with "leaden," which means dark, soft, and heavy like lead) because when it snows, it does seem like the snow-clouds are giant sieves through which the flakes fall.
  • Alabaster. It has a great sound: AL-a-bas-ter. It's also a good word to describe snow, because snow looks as cold, white, and smooth as alabaster marble.
  • Sifts. It sounds soft, like snow falling.
  • Artisans. It's a funny word to use to describe snowflakes, but I like to imagine the snowflakes as tiny artists ("artisan" means artist or craftsperson) working to transform an autumn landscape into a winter one.
  • Stump. "Stump" seems like such an unpoetic word, and yet it still sounds good in this poem.

    From October 10:
  • October 10. If the poem were called "Autumn" instead of "October 10," I wouldn't like it nearly as much. Titling the poem this way suggests that Berry captured the scene at a precise, fleeting moment--not October 9th or 11th but October 10th. Now, every year on October 10th, I think of this poem.
  • Sycamore. It has a beautiful sound and rhythm: "SYC-a-more."
  • Crow. Because it's the only noisy thing in the poem.
  • Grow. There are a lot of long "O" words in the poem. Even the title, Oc-tooo-ber, has a long "O" sound. Grow is a good example because it ends the poem and it rhymes with an earlier word, "crow."

    From Door:
  • Whine. Because it's onomatopoetic. That is, actual whining sounds like the word "whing".
  • Binoculars. Like "stump," it's not a word you'd expect to find in a poem.
  • Mushrooms. Because I love mushrooms! Also, I like the way the word sounds. I always want to say it slowly.

    From Disillusionment at Ten O'Clock:
  • Baboons. It's a funny word for a funny animal. Who would ever dream of baboons?
  • Periwinkles. Another great sounding word. "Periwinkles" seem like they would be something magical.
  • Haunted. At first it might be strange to think that a nightgown could "haunt" something but it works well because long white nightgowns look like ghosts.

Now For the Fun Part!

Now that you've read about some of my favorite words in these poems, tell me yours! Either choose some from this list or go back to the poems (Wind and Silver, The Snow, October 10, Door, and Disillusionment at Ten O'Clock) and choose your own. Then vote in the box below:
What are your favorite words in these poems? Why do you like them?


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